Final Project of Writing 2


Teachers Should Classify Willing Students and Low-Motivated Students
As we know that the government has made several ways to solve the problems of education. However, the problems remain unsolved. I offer one solution to solve the problem. In my opinion, teachers should classify willing students and low-motivated students in order to make the learning and teaching progress in school more effective. There is a number of positive benefits if the schools in Indonesia apply this. Firstly, teachers feel easier to teach the students because the students are classified based on their willingness. Secondly, teachers are well-prepared to manage the class of low-motivated students. Therefore, the teachers are able to recognize the behavior of the students and the teacher could handle them. Thirdly, the willing students are able to learn without any interferences from low-motivated students and become more motivated to learn. The last is the students are able to compet
e their knowledge at the same level. I think that those benefits can improve the quality of education in Indonesia. By: Hendra
BEING A GAMER IS NOT BAD
Every single person has a hobby, and also they have their spare time to do it. Play a game is the best thing to spend our spare time. It makes our feeling happy and it is good for relaxing. When we have some problems or assignment that we stuck on it, playing a game is a good thing for reduce our stress. But, some people think that play a game is wasting time and not necessary. They just see from the negative side. Look, playing a game is not only for have a good time. There’s so many kind of games, for example strategy game, it makes we to think a good strategy to finish the game. So, it improves our knowledge, our skill to think critically. Besides that, if the gamer is can’t speak English well, they have to know the meaning of words or sentences in that game. It makes the gamer know some vocabularies in English which usually used in conversation. And also, we can know something from playing a game if the game is coming from history a country, like a war, an empire or a lore game. If you think that gamer is not have any friend, it’s totally wrong. Being a gamer makes we have a lot of friends, we can find them from playing game which includes online service. We can chatting, send some messages or video call. So, being a gamer is not bad. Trust that. By: Nara

BEING A WRITER IS NOT DIFFICULT
            Some people say that being a writer is a very difficult. It is cause by difficulty choosing the topic. I think, being a writer is not difficult because you can choose the topic that is very interesting and get across to the reader. Like the topic that is familiar for the reader. In arrange a paragraph the controlling idea should go hand in hand with the topic.  When you choose the supporting details, it must be support the topic sentence. If the supporting details are not appropriate with the topic, the paragraph will be untidy and the reader will be confused what you have written. Then you can express your imagination to write something that is interesting for the reader and you can tell the reader about your experience in order to the paragraph become more interesting. By: Ngurah Budaartha

Late is a Habit that Makes You Poor
Sometimes we are late for doing something. Late is serious problem. If you can’t disappear it, it will impact to you. It will make you poor, because there is an idiom “time is money”. If you are still do late, that means you waste the time and time-wasting means you waste the money too. There are a lot of opportunities in this life. There is an opportunity that you can’t take in another time. If you are still wasting the time, you may lose that opportunity and you will regret it. If your friends invite you to come to his/her birthday party and you come late, you will lose the past moment in your friend’s birthday. So, your time will be shorter than the time that you should have. By: Era

Parangtritis Beach


Parangtritis beach located at Yogyakarta. According to people around that beach, Parangtritis beach is a holy place because the people believe that Nyi Roro Kidul live at near the beach pricesely at Laut Pantai Selatan. Parangtritis beach is also a place when the people around the beach held the holy ceremony for Nyai Roro Kidul. According to people around the beach, if someone comes to the beach who wearing green clothes, he/she will disappear from the beach and he/she not come back again. By: Nanda




4 komentar:

Putu Ngurah Wage Myartawan, S.Pd., M.Pd. mengatakan...

Dear Hendra,
Well, this is a very good piece of composition. The logic is clear and all the details support your argument which is clearly articulated.

My suggestion is avoid using "as we know" when writing. Second, you write a word "compet". Please check this out.

Putu Ngurah Wage Myartawan, S.Pd., M.Pd. mengatakan...

Dear Buda,
I think your writing is not really an opinion paragraph. It is more an explanatory composition, that is, to explain a case to make the readers understand something.

Putu Ngurah Wage Myartawan, S.Pd., M.Pd. mengatakan...

Dear Nanda,
You writing is not an opinion paragraph either. There is no argument you defend here, right?

Hendra Raharja mengatakan...

Thank you for your comments sir. I have to be more careful to type. Hendra

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