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Teachers should classify willing students and low-motivated students
- more effective in teaching and learning progress
- to make teacher easier to teach
- to make the willing students able to learn without any interference from low-motivated students
- to make willing students more motivated to learn
- to make teacher well-prepared to manage the class of low-motivated students
- able to compete their knowledge at the same level
                                                                By: Hendra

Being a gamer is not bad:
- it makes our feeling happy
- it reduces our stress
- we can improve our English
- we can improve our knowledge
- we can learn something by playing each types of game
- we can find a new friend from another country by playing game online
- It's good for spend our spare time
                                                                  By: Nara

Fishing is nice hobby:
- It is a kind of sport.
- It can train our patient.
- To make our brain feel fresh.
- We can feel happy when we get a fish.
                                                                  By: Ngurah

Drunkard is a crazy person
1 -When they are drunk, they lose our control
2 -They are doing something unconsciousness
3 -Sometimes, they laugh by themselves
4 -They say illogical words
5 -They feel that they are always right  
                                                                 By: Era 


Parangtritis beach
-It is a holy place according to the people around the beach.
-According to the story, some people held a holy ceremony for Nyai Roro Kidul.
-According to the story, if someone come to the beach and that peraon wearing a shirt which colors are red, green, and black, the person will dissapear.
                                                                By: Nanda

2 komentar:

Putu Ngurah Wage Myartawan, S.Pd., M.Pd. mengatakan...

Dear Ngurah,
Looking at your details, maybe you can find a more interesting topic sentence, not just by simply telling that "fishing is a nice hobby".

Putu Ngurah Wage Myartawan, S.Pd., M.Pd. mengatakan...

Dear Era,
What do you mean by 'drunks'? Have you consulted your dictionary for the word 'drunk'?

Please make a more arguable topic sentence, which can attract the attention of more readers.

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